雅思考试写作之两大作文结尾段要素
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摘要: 无锡环球雅思小编为大家带来两大雅思大作文结尾段要素分享，考生可以借鉴参考一下，以下是具体内容： 结尾段要点 雅思大作文结尾段要素之一：restatementofyouropinion 有的文章在第一段已经表达了作者的观点，那么这种情况
无锡环球雅思小编为大家带来两大雅思大作文结尾段要素分享，考生可以借鉴参考一下，以下是具体内容：
结尾段要点
雅思大作文结尾段要素之一： restatement of your opinion
有的文章在第一段已经表达了作者的观点，那么这种情况，只要在最后一段重申一下就可以了。但是不能照抄一遍!或者将主体段所阐述的分论点(即ideas)的内容总结一下。但是，千万不要在末段的观点与全文的观点矛盾!
有的文章在第一段未明确地表达作者的观点，那么这种情况，就必须在最后一段明确地表达一下观点。
雅思大作文结尾段要素之二： offering solutions or recommendations(optional)
有时候雅思题目会要求考生提供对某种现象的解决方法、建议等等，这种情况，就按照题目要求在结尾段分析解决方法或建议等。
注： 首尾段之间一般有一定的呼应，绝对不能自相矛盾。
如：
第一段： many years ago trying to help people with every kind of trouble left me with one sure conviction: in case after case the difficulty could have been overcome — or might never have arisen — if the people involved had just treated one another with common courtesy.
结尾段：in the end, it all comes down to how you regard people — not just people in general, but individuals. life is full of minor irritations and trials and injustices. the only constant, daily effective solution is politeness — which is the golden rule in action.
说明：很明显尾段没有重复首段的内容，但内容是相联系的。
这个雅思大作文结尾的高分模板的思路即将回顾全文部分省略，直接表达观点和意图。这种结尾方式比较适合于纯单边支持的作文，以下我们来看几个例子：
it is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it. but attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.
关于人才流失的话题，作者在结尾一上来就表达了自己的立场，即无法阻止这个现象。但是进而又对改变这个状况做了期待。我们来对比另外一个例子：
all in all， the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone. nations need to work together on long-term projects， sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.
在分析解决型题材的结尾中我们也可以采用这种2要素的结尾方式，如果最后所剩时间不是很充分的前提下，省略对全文的回顾而直接表达观点也是一种明智的决定。
to conclude， it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforce have increased， they are still disadvantaged because they generally put the welfare of others， particularly the family， above financial ambition or promotion.
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